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Here is the video from my presentation if you wanna give it another look. I know some of you enjoyed it so, if you did, now you can watch it as much as you want!!!

Have a great weekend everybody.

Thanks,
Jack

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Earlier last week, I was asked the question, "If Rey were male, could he be a Gary Stu?" For one, we must remember that a Mary Sue or, in this case, a Gary Stu would be a character crafted by a writer producing a fic who unintentionally happens to write them without flaws or weaknesses. So we, given this, we could ask "If Rey were male, could he be LIKE a Gary Stu?"

I would have to say "No." I feel the entire concept of a Gary Stu is more of accidental inclusion of a male character without flaws and while a Mary Sue is very much the same thing except for a female character, I believe that the inequity in the relationship between a man and woman is what causes a woman to write their characters as such. Given what I interpreted from Camille-Bacon Smith, I believe that a woman writes their perception of how they view a perfect woman. However, while the woman is written as independent and knowledgeable, most often she becomes a self-sacrificing servant to the man. This might be due to what society has pushed onto woman and thus a young woman, the type of writers most susceptible to including Mary Sues, might not have the maturity to understand this inequity.

So I feel Rey would very much be like a "Gary Stu" as she would be a flawless male character. However, the impact of Rey being a man would be infinitely less resonant than if she were a woman as the traits of perfection that a woman writes into a Mary Sue conveys what she believes to be a perfect relationship, a relationship that, unknown to the woman, is quite one-sided.
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For my final project, I will be examining Rey's Mary Sue characteristics and how they translate over to fanfiction.

I must give some backstory though. If you've seen Star Wars: The Force Awakens, and even Star Wars: The Last Jedi, you will have recognized that Rey is basically perfect. She rarely ever messes up and in instances where she discovers something new, such as when she discovers the Millenium Falcon, she knows exactly how it works, flies it perfectly, knows exactly what tools she needs to fix it, and, even in the presence of Han Solo, knows how to bypass the transmitter to ensure they remain in lightspeed. COME ON! How could she know more than Han Solo upon just discovering it.

This is one of many instances in the film. I request that you watch this video as it displays more through video than I could ever explain with words...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yvdRcsBxQUg&list=LLCQCRxNa6nSQsl63eKYdCPg&index=4&t=0s

Now Rey herself is not a Mary Sue, but she does possess the attributes of Mary Sue. I discovered the satirical fic "Violette Oriane Miriana Indigo Twilight Jinn-Kenobi-Windu-Fett-Palpatine-Amidala AKA Rey doesn't have time for Mary-Sue bullshit." Hilarious! This fic exaggerates her these characteristics to a comedic sense. Lines such as "Drawing her Super Badass Qui-Wan Fusion saber©" are clearly intended to mock how perfect, almost too good to be true, Rey is. Rey must fight against another Sue. In the end, Rey wins, because she embodies a Mary Sue, albeit in a glamorus "she exploded into a puff of pink glitter" type of death.

file:///Users/jackmuench/Desktop/FWS%20Final/Violette%20Oriane%20Miriana%20Indigo%20Twilight%20Jinn-Kenobi-Windu-Fett-Palpatine-Amidala%20AKA%20Rey%20doesn't%20hav.webarchive

Take a look and see for yourself.
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Tosenberger approaches Harry Potter fanfiction from the lens of an adolescent reader in "Homosexuality at the Online Hogwarts: Harry Potter Slash Fanfiction." But why fanfiction, let alone Harry Potter fanfiction? By now, we understand that a great deal of fanfiction, particularly Harry Potter, exists in the form of "slash." While I know that all of you understand this concept by now, I will retread on it anyways. With "slash," writers are able to take canonical characters and place them into relationships with each other, often homosexual or queer relationships. But why would adolescents want to read "slash?" According to Tosenberger, the availability of such Harry Potter fics to an adolescent community "affords fans a certain measure of concealment, which proves especially valuable for young fans who fear the consequences of expressing non-heteronormative desires" (187). Given that Harry Potter is particularly attractive to such a young audience, adolescents can insert themselves into the characters in Harry Potter, and thus, into the characters portrayed in the fics. Basically, these fics allow a young community to explore their sexuality in a safe manner without fear.

What makes these fics, particularly the fics produced today, so attractive to such a crowd is that they don't paint homophobia as an aspect that inhibits the characters. I must say that this message is very uplifting for those reading these fics who currently feel uncomfortable about their sexuality. It's often portrayed as the characters' claiming that they've never been with another person of the same gender. However, the ages of the young characters in Harry Potter suggest that it is almost certain that their homosexual encounter is likely their first sexual encounter ever. (194). Because the characters' themselves do not feel ashamed of their sexuality, it teaches the reader that they themselves do not need to feel ashamed for their sexuality

Furthermore, we know that "fans have always been perfectly content to 'let [their] imagination take over where [Rowling] left off" (196). Even if it's not canonical, fans don't mind crafting their beloved characters into how they see fit. For instance, while Rowling has very much painted characters, such as Snape and Malfoy, as quite unattractive, the fics often cancel out this inhibiting aspect (196). This is why we have so many categories of slash, like buddyslash, enemyslash, and powerslash. However, enemyslash and powerslash, in particular, are most comfortable with outright rejecting the nature of the characters in the canon. In such slash fics, characters like Harry and Malfoy, typically archenemies, can fall in love with each other. The idea that their love alone can overcome their hatred is powerful, and even arousing thought.

While there are many fics based around other sources like Star Trek and Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Harry Potter is special. I mean, it's had seven very large books to build its universe, but books, in particular, are important. With a book, a reader crafts the image of Hogwarts in their head. It's different from every reader: from you to me, from an adult to an adolescent (disregarding the images that the movies give you). With visual mediums like the ones listed above, your mind is almost confined to the images that the shows give you. there is no alternative view to the Star Trek enterprise, it just is how it is on screen.

The universe Rowling has crafted "has left an enormous amount of room for speculation; the famous epilogue of Hallows only discusses certain aspects of the fates of a few major characters, nineteen years after the events of the main narrative" (203). With the conclusions ambiguity, there are limitless, or almost limitless, stories one can craft. We can apply the logic to the rest of the books as well. We know that the majority of the novel is focused on Harry, and, because of this, the rest of the characters have a background that is, while well-defined, open to other stories.

Hence, we have numerous amounts of slash fics that expand on this universe. However, given the openness for these other characters, one might just need to question if the fics may very well fit into the canon in the first place. The idea of same-sex relationships in the Potter universe will be debated endlessly, but one thing is for sure, Harry Potter's vast universe allows for a vast number of slash fics that may very well be the one thing the allows our adolescents to explore their sexuality.
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I was scrolling through A03 searching for the craziest fic I could find. I mean, I'm sure that there are ones that exist that are far crazier, but I felt I found the pinnacle of strange with "The Coming of the End." I witnessed Voldemort seduce Draco, although not in the typical context. It was almost as if the Voldemort's darkness was genuine arousal for Draco. He lures him to the bed. He's in complete control of him. Whatever Voldemort beckons, Draco performs. Although Draco appears to be coaxed into doing so, it's difficult to imagine him enjoying it given the lines, "As Draco's life extinguishes just like the green light around them, Voldemort climaxes and fills a dead body with his hot release." As far as it goes, I was fascinated.
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Draco smirked as he sat at the desk. Harry knew that he was the one who sabotaged his Defense Against the Dark Arts exam, and he was not going to let him off easy.

He knew he could catch him. Draco was vulnerable. He was working on his essay about the medieval witch burnings all alone in the Hogwarts Library.

Harry snuck into the library under the safety of his invisibility cloak. He patiently waited as Draco slowly scribbled the words onto his paper.

As his essay came to a close, he dipped his quill into the bottle of ink for the last time and proudly began his final sentence.

At the very moment his quill drew the period signifying the end of the essay, the bottle of ink tipped and spilled all over his entire essay. It was ruined!

Draco’s scream echoed throughout the silent library!

It was a small action. However, Harry couldn't help but sadistically smile with satisfaction. Draco got what he deserved.
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The concept of language is so brilliantly explored in “Hush,” a Buffy the Vampire Slayer episode that places the Scooby Gang in a nightmarish scenario with a group called the Gentlemen who steal the voices of Sunnydale’s residents in order to obtain seven hearts. We watch in fear as our normally talkative characters become refined down to an expressive face with a pair of arms and legs. Given the panic that ensues, we might lead ourselves to believe that language is the best way to convey our thoughts to the people around us, and, for the most part, you’d be right. We, as well as the Scoobies, strongly desire language’s simplicity and having our thoughts understood by others in a quick manner. Heck, I’m writing this essay for you to read with the use of language because it’s an efficient way to convey my thoughts with you. However, it’s how we use language to navigate around what we really want to say that limits us. While it might seem like communication would fall apart entirely, our characters actually begin to express more than they could have in the presence of language. Through Scoobies’ silence, I received a glimpse of not only the benefits, but also the limits of language as a form of communication.
We ironically begin the episode with a lecture about the difference between communication and language, a foreshadow of what’s to come for Sunnydale. It’s here where we are first introduced to our villains, the Gentlemen, during Buffy’s dream. It’s established early on in the episode that language limits, rather than enhances, the characters’ communication. For instance, Buffy and Riley, who clearly display attraction for each other, avoid expressing how they feel in fear of their exposing their identities to each other. Even Xander struggles express his love for Anya, despite her attempts to get him to do so. The most prominent, and truly exciting, instance occurs when Willow attends the Wicca group and attempts to speak on behalf of witchcraft. Her suggestion is immediately shut down but a girl named Tara steps in and attempts to support Willow, but fails to do so. Her defeated expression displays how desperately she wished to, but how the act of speaking holds her back. In each of these instances, language inhibits communication. What was presumed to be an obvious benefit for communication has become silencer for all our characters’ true desires. Let’s think about it: in the beginning of a relationship, in an oddly backwards manner, it’s almost easier to show a person that you love them than to literally say the words “I love you.” We fear how the other person will react or how they will interpret, or rather misinterpret, our own words. The oversaturation of language in the first act contrasts the ensuing acts where our characters are speechless, literally.
We come upon the Gentlemen, a group of black suit-wearing vampires who steal our characters’ voices. Upon waking up, Buffy and Willow open their mouths to complete silence. Suddenly, this “convenience” they’ve had since the beginning of the show disappears. Our characters must resort to only gestures, actions, and writing to communicate, but we quickly realize how easily such actions can be misinterpreted as well.
In a particularly humorous scene, the Scooby Gang discusses possible ways to defeat the henchmen through the use of slides. When Giles presents the question “What do they want,” Willow gestures towards her chest. Xander assumes that she’s gesturing towards her boobs, but we learn that she was really pointing to her heart. In addition, Xander poses the question “How do we kill them?” Buffy mimics a stabbing motion by moving her hand up and down. However, everyone is confused as the gesture clearly appears suggest that of masturbation. It’s only when Buffy actually grabs the stake that the characters truly recognize what she intended to convey. Such instances convey what type of communication we struggle with without language. With her voice, it would have been much easier to simply say what she wants. “Can’t we just stab them through the heart?” When the communication involves immediacy, that’s when language benefits us, and that’s exactly why communication failed multiple times in this scene. It’s not only frustrating that our own thoughts would not be able to be conveyed in an immediate manner, but it’s also frustrating that those thoughts and ideas would be misinterpreted when we convey them.
However, as the episode progresses, the roadblocks of language that our characters experienced at the beginning of the episode are relieved. Buffy’s inability to speak allows her and Riley to share an unprompted kiss together, something she’s been wanting to receive the entire episode. Similarly, Xander’s protective tendencies towards Anya prove to her, without any words being said, that he truly does care deeply for her. I know it’s clichèd, but here it is so true: “An action speaks louder than words.” Furthermore, as my excitement stated earlier, the most riveting reveal occurs between Willow and Tara. As Tara attempts to bring Willow a potion that could restore their voices, she encounters the Gentlemen. The two eventually run into each other and take refuge in a laundry room. They’re trapped and they need to barricade the door fast! Willow struggles even wiggle the vending machine using her telekinesis by herself. However, Tara recognizes Willow’s weakness. The two join hands! Together, with both of their powers combined, they thrust the machine in front of the door, preventing the Gentlemen's' entry. With one single action, the two say more about their ensuing relationship than any amount of words could have said.
A seasoned Buffy viewer would know what this relationship is leading to. I’m sorry, but I must spoil something to make my point. Willow and Tara eventually become a couple and Tara dies. With one single clasp of the hand, they convey, and in the process foreshadow, what neither of them could have said with the presence of words. I’m not alone with this. In her article “Buffy’s Silent Episode Was an Elegy for Its Gays,” Andrea Long Chu recognizes the significance of this moment because it cleverly foreshadows their future relationship without directly stating it. It could only be convincingly done with this episode. According to Chu, her girlfriend “...loves Willow and Tara too. I hold this knowledge close to myself, build it a cage from my ribs. [Their relationship and her death] cannot be spoken. One day, a smiling man will float into my bedroom, cut me open and pull it out. ‘What’s wrong?’ my girlfriend asks. I want to tell her. The words don’t come.” Similarly to the episode, Chu knows what is going to happen with these characters at this moment, yet she knows that she, just like our characters in “Hush,” cannot share this information with her girlfriend. Chu describes sharing such knowledge almost as if it were an insurmountable task. The simplicity of language not only becomes a limiting factor for the characters of the show but for Chu as well.
I couldn’t help but interpret subtext from this scene. Given that we know that Willow and Tara will eventually be a couple, I couldn’t help but feel this scene represents the difficulty of coming out. Many fear coming out because of the possible repercussions that feel they might face, such as neglect or disapproval from their family or peers. When we speak, the words we say nearly cement how we feel while our thoughts about such feelings might change independent of what we’ve said. With coming out, one literally has to use language to cement how they define their sexuality. In a way, Willow and Tara’s silence appear to be them coming out to themselves and to each other, something that neither of them could say with language.
User InTheWind expands on their silence with “No Words,” a fic where Tara attempts to write Willow a letter describing how much she loves her after the events of “Hush.” Tara, struggling to say this with her own words directly to Willow, writes “I’ve never felt a connection like that before, and from the way you looked at me I thought that maybe you might have felt it too. You must have, right, in that second when you first took my hand? How else could you have known exactly what I wanted us to do?” (InTheWind). It’s difficult for her to cope. We understand Tara’s great struggle to convey her words to Willow. She finishes with “I’ve never been good at the whole talking thing. Maybe someday I’ll even tell you I love you” (InTheWind). Even after having her voice restored, Tara still can’t share what she obviously wants to say to Willow. Language is something we use, or rather don’t use, to navigate around what we want to say. We fear how other people will react to our own thoughts, so we suppress them. In this case, Tara feels quite certain that Willow feels the same way, but the fear of having her words misinterpreted keeps her from telling Willow.
Maybe our language inhibits what we want to say more than we make ourselves believe. We might assume that simply speaking is the easiest way for one to convey their thoughts, but there just might be a roadblock in the way. “Hush” is a television episode like no other. It displays not benefits, but also the limits of human language. So, while we may assume the best way to convey our thoughts is to say them, pause and think. We may have more roadblocks in the way of what we truly want to say than we lead ourselves onto. And if so, maybe an action can say more than any amount of words ever could.
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Finally, something I'm familiar with! Coppa comments on the massive cult following of Star Wars fandom. She mentions that then-vice president Jim Ward warned fans from producing fanfiction based on the Star Wars canon, close-mindedly saying "Fandom is about celebrating the story the way that it is." What a buzzkill! Needless to say, George Lucas and his company did everything they could to limit the spread of fanfiction based on his beloved series. However, with the rise of Star Wars: Episode 7, and with Lucas now out of the picture, fans have a whole new set out characters to inspire their fics with, particularly that of Finn and Rey.

Given this background, we delve into “The Story of Finn,” a fic that explores a group of stormtroopers who idolize Finn, or rather FN-2187, for his bravery in defecting from the First Order. They ponder how he was able to break free from his programming. Most stormtroopers, if they have the bravery to defect at all, defect quietly, but not Finn. Finn leaves with “bang.” Not in silence, but rather a grandiose model for those who want to defect, yet have been too afraid to do so.

The fic mentions stories filled with “Death Stars and Old Empires and Skywalkers.” According to the story, “Some Troopers don’t like these ones - almost hate them… They don’t want to hear them; they don’t believe they’re true.” I feel this line is a metaphor for the fic writers’ true feelings regarding the original Star Wars canon considering George Lucas’s disdain for fics outside his films. And if he won’t let their fics live in his Star Wars universe, then they're going to craft their own. In the universe of course, but not with the characters he created. He’s not good enough, nor open-minded enough to deserve that.
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Buffy was in the thick of her dream.

She lay completely still on her bed as Riley gracefully, albeit sensually, approaches her. She scoots over to make room for him. He slides onto the bed.

The two stare at each other for what feels like an eternity. Eventually, Riley moves his hand onto Buffy’s head. He begins to slowly reel her in. The tension is building. Buffy’s heart races as the distance between each other’s lips transitions from inches to mere centimeters. Her eyes close.

Right as her lips tap Riley’s, she hears a confused voice whisper…

“Cheese?”

Buffy’s eyes dart open! Riley is gone! The Cheese Man is in his place.

“I’ve lost the cheese! It’s nowhere to be found!” he screams.

Buffy sits up flabbergasted and understandably disappointed.

The Cheese Man rolls over and continuing to repeat the same two sentences. Buffy sees that the cheese is taped to the back of his head.

She tries to open her mouth and tell him, but the words won’t come out.

The Cheese Man begins tearing apart Buffy’s room looking for cheese.

Buffy confidently walks over, rips the cheese off the back of his head, and slaps him across the face with it.

The Cheese Man stops. He goes cross-eyed as he examines the cheese on his face. He smiles brighter than anyone has smiled before and peels it off his face. Holding it up like a trophy, he says…

“You must find the cheese, the cheese will not find you.”

He takes the cheese and slams it into Buffy’s lips.

Buffy's eyes jolt open... for real this time.
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Video Games! I feel many people have a preconceived notion that the entertainment of video games and the rich plot of movies cannot coexist. However, I beg to differ.

Look no further than Naughty Dog's masterpiece "The Last of Us." Never have I seen a video game so rich in subtext that it makes me contemplate decisions I make in life.

Of course, I'm sure many of you have not heard of this game, and that's a shame.

Let's give some background. Our main character, Joel, loses his teenage daughter during the outbreak of a zombie infection. Some 20 years after this incident, he still suffers from that tragic loss. There's quite a void in his life. However, Joel meets Ellie, a fourteen-year-old girl who very well has immunity from the disease. When the opportunity arises, Joel and Ellie must embark on a journey across the country in order to discover whether this cure can be reproduced.

There, that's what the back of the game case would say, but that's not what I'm here for. I'm here to talk with you about Ellie, who holds many secrets herself. Ellie is a character rich with backstory. We learn that she never knew who her parents were and never knew life before the apocalypse. She bolsters a old zombie bite mark on her arm. Why hasn't she turned into a zombie? It's questions like these that leave the gamer guessing. However, we can trace how she got her bite back to a specific moment in the game.

Her and her friend, Riley, sneak into an abandoned mall and explore. They share a nice moment together in a record shop together. They dance atop a glass table. Slowly, they reel each other a bit closer. Close enough to the point where Ellie can't help but unconsciously kiss her friend Riley. It's here that we definitively learn that Ellie is gay.

It was hinted on throughout the game, but this flashback doesn't occur to well into the game. It's like adding another puzzle piece to Ellie's backstory.

However, Ellie and Riley are eventually ambushed by the zombies and bit. Riley forces Ellie to leave as she ultimately sacrifices herself to the zombies. And, as we know, Ellie does not turn from this bite.

I was reading a fanfic on this very moment called "The Sad Start to the Path We Travel On." It recounts this moment, but it presents a much more tragic turn of events. After being bitten, they both agree to just sit there and lose their minds together as they turn into zombies. Ellie shares her feelings for Riley and they patiently wait as the disease consumes them. At some point, Ellie unconsciously pulls out the gun. Her friend begins to turn into a zombie, but she doesn't. Ellie points the gun at Riley and shoots her.

I'm enthralled by this fanfic because it expands on their relationship beyond what the game has to offer. In addition, I feel this ending administers a greater emotional punch as we face a huge dilemma. Will Ellie kill her best friend who she has feelings for? Yes, she does.

Alright, I know that was long. I'm not sure who might be reading this, but I just wanted to give an introduction to the game that I very well might use on my final project. I ALSO URGE YOU TO PLAY THIS GAME IF YOU GET A CHANCE! At least Google it. It's so much deeper and personal than your typical zombie apocalypse scenario.

Oh, and have a great weekend everyone!
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The premise of the episode “Hush” is simple yet very effective; our characters that normally talk constantly have their voices removed and are forced to communicate in unique ways in order to defeat The Gentlemen. It’s haunting to watch our beloved characters crumble as they struggle to communicate with each other. The episode begins similarly to the others; the opening is filled with almost meaningless dialogue, an ironic foreshadowing of what’s to come. However, once The Gentlemen remove their voices, complete silence arises among the people of Sunnydale and pandemonium ensues. Our characters must resort to writing or gestures, but it becomes clear how easily this can be misinterpreted. For instance, during the scene where the Scoobies discuss methods to defeat The Gentlemen, Buffy attempts to suggest that they drive a stake through their hearts. However, the gesture becomes misinterpreted as a gesture of masturbation. Long, complex sentences become refined to simple nods, winks, and hand gestures which get easily confused in the process of communication. The frustration comes from our characters not only being unable to communicate with others but being unable to be understood by others in a quick manner. Being a series that was praised for its writing, it’s a bold choice to make an episode that primarily free from any dialogue. “Hush” displays our dire need for language and how we, humans, break down when that necessity is taken away.
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"The Buffy Effect: Or, A Tale of Cleavage and Marketing" explores the idea of true feminism beyond the face-value assumption. Fudge describes that a woman it's a lot easier to wear "a 'girls kick ass' t-shirt than to learn how to defend yourself physically." Buffy represents a woman who not only "wears a girl's kick ass t-shirt" but actually kicks ass while "wearing" it. In this situation, Buffy doesn't just represent a strong woman figure, she literally is a strong woman figure. Like, literally, she kicks other guy's asses with her own strength. As we have seen, this is very apparent in the Buffy episode "Becoming: Part 2." However, there is much more to feminism in the ending of this episode than the physical "kickassery." After fighting with Angel, we witness Buffy kill him. POWERFUL! WOW! I WAS GOING INSANE! Insane, because this represents an aspect of feminism that I feel many creators leave out. Many portray a strong female character who compete with men, but few portray a woman with the quality the Buffy displays at the end of this episode: Emotional Maturity. This episode is clearly an allegory about completely breaking off a relationship. You might still love the other person, but you ultimately have to make the right choice for you and those around you. This precisely mirrors Buffy as, despite her deep love for Angel, she must kill him because she knows it's the right decision to make. It's a mature decision to make and she makes it. So for any creative feminist writers out there, don't sleep on emotional maturity. Because a woman doesn't have to sacrifice her emotions to be a COMPLETE BADASS!
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A woman’s sexuality is sacred, but in today’s society, it’s become increasingly difficult for women to truly express their sexuality without being portrayed as sexual objects themselves. It comes to the point where women are graded by how they look, what physical features they possess, and even how sexually experienced they are. All these questions describe women purely as sexual objects and not the human beings they actually are. Given this, it’s no wonder that so many women bear so much worry about the way themselves, as females, are viewed. There must be some escape from this barrage where a woman can truly express her sexuality. Where is it? A large majority have found that sexual escape in the world of Star Trek fanfiction, particularly slash fanfiction. One particular example of this sexual exploration is displayed in the Star Trek slash fanfic “What Happens When You Disobey” by user DuncanByrne. It’s through fanfiction, such as this, that women can explore sexual fantasies in a safe way without sexualizing themselves.
The summary listed at the beginning of the piece immediately hints at the sexual abuse that is going to come: “Little Jim is going to get what he deserves from his master…”
(DuncanByrne). We open with Spock bolstering a menacing grin in front of Kirk who appears hand-cuffed to a contraption. The fic goes into graphic detail of Kirk’s abused physical state. His filth is described with lines such as “drips of sweat were oozing from his armpits… a stream of dried urine caked his inner thighs… his hips marked with red welts... brown smear on his buttocks from the shit he’d been unable to keep in hours ago” (DuncanByrne). The fic has nothing to hide. Spock is in complete control of Jim whose frustration only grows as he dons a chastity belt. The use of vivid imagery allows the audience to imagine the pain and disgust he feels as he must do what his Master, Spock, says. Kirk professes to Spock that he will no longer misbehave, but Spock does not care. Spock proceeds to spank Kirk, and eventually rapes him with explicit detail. The fic describes Spock “sliding in and out through Jim’s filth with ease from the slippery lubrication of his own shit” while “placing his hand back on Jim’s cock with urgent tugs and grabs” (DuncanByrne). It’s at this point where we finally understand what Kirk has done to deserve this; “Will you seek out other men’s cocks after this experience? Will this behavior persist?” (DuncanByrne) he asks. Jim insists “No” as he apologizes to his Spock for his disloyalty and begs him to continue. As Spock finishes, he decides to suck and drink “boyishly sweet cum out of [Kirk’s] penis” (DuncanByrne) and reaffirms that Kirk shall never let another man please him again.
Now, I know what you’re thinking: What kind of twisted, graphic fantasy was that? I completely understand because that’s what I saw the first time I read it too. However, beyond the gruesomely detailed graphic imagery lies a much greater purpose to the idea of slash fanfiction. In her essay Pornography by Women for Women, with Love, author Joanna Russ answers the question: Why is fanfiction important? I’ll tell you for certain that the reasons hold far more importance than what’s being taken at face-value from the fic above.
Russ describes slash fanfiction as “the only sexual fantasy by women for women that’s produced without control” (Russ 82) It’s difficult to imagine at first, but it’s true; These women are crafting homosexual relationships between characters from a science-fiction television show in order to arouse themselves, but why? It would seem logical that if a heterosexual woman were to desire fantasy they would read those typical female romance novels that actually contain a man and a woman. However, what is portrayed in these novels is not a real relationship, it’s an inequity between the man and the woman. In these novels, the man is the one who always holds the power, making the woman seem insignificant and powerless. It’s for these reasons that many women prefer to write their fantasies into homosexual relationships, especially in different universes such as Star Trek. It allows a woman to distance herself from the inequality of real relationships while allowing her to indulge in her true fantasies.
However, that being said, it still does not justify the brutality and the graphic nature of such fan-fiction. If women are writing about their own fantasies, then, given the fanfic we just witnessed, are you telling me that rape is what they want? No, kind reader, actual rape is not what they want and neither is the “shit” or the “filth” that the fic describes, although some may actually enjoy that aspect of it. As Russ professes, “masochistic rape fantasies have bedeviled the women’s movement for a decade as if they were a literal representation of what women want” (Russ 93). Women may not enjoy the idea of rape, but rather the idea of being overpowered and becoming irresistible to a man. That’s what the idea of “What Happens When You Disobey” portrays. It’s the idea of being overpowered and eventually losing yourself solely in another person that is such a turn-on for many women.
Women may fantasize about masochism, but if it’s made between a woman and a man, society may easily misconstrue what women want and take the fantasy as fact. Star Trek fanfiction allows women to express their sexual desires in a safe way without sexualizing themselves in the process and without society taking these fantasies out of context. Maybe even some women enjoy actually being sexually overpowered but they fear this idea of being overpowered will carry over outside their sexual lives and into their normal lives, and in many ways it unfortunately has. Attaching their fantasies to vastly different circumstances disguises them from being taken as fact. For many women, this is their safe sexual escape.
Why does it have to be like this in this in the first place? A woman’s sexuality is something that she should be able to comfortably express without fear of it having repercussions. While we might not have this yet, we surely do have fanfics like “What Happens When You Disobey” that allow these sexual feelings, however unique they may be, to be expressed. We have quite a way to go before women don’t have to fear how their sexuality will affect their public image. Hopefully that day will come soon enough, but for the time being, women, let Star Trek be your sexual sanctuary.
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The setting is 1930's New York City.

"I want her to live!" yelled Kirk

"Do you realize what will happen if you save her?" Spock calmly replies.

Kirk turns away in defeat. He knows the answer yet refuses to believe it.

"An apocalypse the likes of which no one on this planet has ever seen before." says Spock

Kirk sheds a tear, replying "But I love her more than I've loved anyone before. I'm lovestruck for her!"

"You're willing to risk the entirety of humanity for that one woman?" Spock asks.

Kirk looks toward Spock and reluctantly utters "No."

Later in the evening, Kirk and Edith Keeler are on their way to the movie.

Kirk knows what he rightfully must let happen.

With Spock waiting, Kirk appears walking through the street. As he knows, he must leave her there. We see McCoy exit the building, and he notices Edith in the middle of the street with a car careening towards her.

Spock and Kirk notice McCoy but at the very last moment, Kirk stops Spock from stopping McCoy.

McCoy dives into the road and saves Edith Keeler from her death.

Kirk and Spock stare at the near accident. Kirk with relief. Spock with astonishment.

Spock musters up the words to ask Kirk one question

"Do you know what you have done?"
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Upon reading Star Trek slash fanfiction, many may come to ask the question: Why are the relationships almost always between two men? This is the question that Penley attempts to answers. To begin, we must ask the opposite: Why not male and female? In many typical romance novels today, a woman must do the mental work to comprehend reasons for a man’s aggressive behavior and ultimately forgive him for them in the end. In this situation, the relationship between the man and the woman are completely unequal. From this, we can interpret that Star Trek slash, specifically that of K/S, was made out of response to this inequality. Writing about two men avoids this typical inequality that is commonly found in so many of these romantic novels. A woman can write two men in the way that they see ideal for them. Kirk and Spock are often made sensitive, yet not to the point where it compromises their humor or strength. In addition, their equality extends to their own race. In fanfiction, Spock is often depicted as feeling humiliated by his appearance and his race, yet Kirk still accepts him as his lifelong mate. The marrying of two different races celebrates the idea of miscegenation, even if no direct parallels to the races we know are made. Through doing so, Slashers are able to eliminate racism and ensure the respect of female characters by not using them as a device to further male-male relationships. It’s a surprising revelation that something like Star Trek fanfiction would be making such a bold, cultural statement as to recast these typical roles in response to the unequal stereotypes found in so many romance novels today.
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